Rachel Ray's background music and tips (reluctantly)
Rewrite
I'm going to write another beginning for the story. Personally, I thought it was awful. God awful. So bad, I think if I gave it enough time, God would teleport into my house and say "W-T-F is that?!". I think it looked like it was made by a eleven-year-old who watches to many action movies and kiddy cartoons. I'm gonna try to take a more serious tone to it. I'm also gonna make it less simple than the "watch over kid, kids a brat, kid gets kidnapped, rescue kid, kid is friend" sort of plot, seems to two dimensional to me (if I ruined the plot for you, don't worry, you didn't miss much). I'm gonna' start working on it now (which isn't very fortunate because I don't have Word >_<). Also, sorry about not logging on to my journal for while. For those few of you who still remember me, I'm trying to get back into writing. I'm also gonna try to improve my journal look. Anyway, what's been going on with you guys? I haven't seen all you in so long, I want to hear all about it!
Just incase someone was curious, here's what I've been doing:
Meeting Stacy Meeting Tito Meeting Sahass Meeting Matt Thinking over ideas for Gate that never actually made it to paper Reading Airborn Breaking up with my girlfriend Still kind of keeping in touch with said girlfriend Making a list of things before I die Trying to read Vellum Putting down Vellum becuase it was to confusing Reading Clockwork Orange Playing Neverwinter Nights 2 Doing yer mum Finding my MP3 Beating Shivering Isles Going Swimming Doin' yer dhad Being depress-ed Going miniture golfing Writing this message on LJ
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otogi_2) wrote,
productive
